Wednesday, October 1, 2008

IS THIS PLAGIARISM? (I THINK SO)

I stumbled upon this veiled yet blatant act of plagiarism (I believe this constitutes plagiarism) by Jay Ortega, a writer for the Philippine Star Modern Living section. I'm posting both the original article (from Rolling Stones) and the Jay Ortega "article" so you can read them both. You be the judge.
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Here's the original article from Rolling Stones:

In the Eighties, thrash metal wasn't a scene, it was an arms race: riffs kept speeding up, drum kits got bigger. But with 1991's Black Album, Metallica opted for unilateral disarmament, slowing their tempos, shortening their songs and smelting their chugging guitars and piston-powered drums into armor-plated pop hooks. After that, the band rushed from one reinvention to another, starting with the Southern-rock infusion of 1996's Load and culminating in the muddled, bizarrely produced group-therapy session of 2003's St. Anger. No longer: Death Magnetic is the musical equivalent of Russia's invasion of Georgia — a sudden act of aggression from a sleeping giant.

Just as U2 re-embraced their essential U2-ness post-Pop, this album is Metallica becoming Metallica again — specifically, the epic, speed-obsessed version from the band's template-setting trilogy of mid-Eighties albums: Master of Puppets, Ride the Lightning and, especially, the progged-out ...And Justice for All. That much is clear from the 90-second mark of Death Magnetic's first track, "That Was Just Your Life," where the band unleashes a barrage of James Hetfield's dutta-duh-duhnt riffing and Lars Ulrich's octuple-time double-bass-and-snare smashing. That long-vanished sound, as essential to Metallica as variations on the "Start Me Up" riff are to the Stones, is all over the album —you wonder how these fortysomething dudes are going to handle playing it live night after night. (Enter chiropractor.)

Death Magnetic marks the group's split with producer Bob Rock, who helmed every Metallica album from 1991 to 2004 and pushed them toward concision and immediacy — until St. Anger, when he seemed to throw up his hands altogether. (As the 2004 documentary Some Kind of Monster demonstrates, Rock deserved credit for getting any music at all out of a band determined to self-destruct.) New producer Rick Rubin shoves Metallica in the opposite direction: Half of Death Magnetic's tracks are over seven minutes long, with song structures that are not so much "verse/chorus/verse" as "long intro/heavy jam/verse/even heavier jam/chorus/bridge/wild solo/outro."

This feels like the right move for an era where Guitar Hero is the new rock radio. (Appropriately, the full album will be downloadable for GH play.) And it's not as if Top 40 stations were going to slip in Metallica between Chris Brown and the Jonas Brothers, anyway. These songs rarely feel too long: At their best, they combine the melodic smarts of Metallica's mature work with the fully armed-and-operational battle power of their early days. "The End of the Line" is a freight-train rocker with a ricocheting riff and lyrics about a doomed, drug-addicted star. It builds to a frantic guitar duel between Kirk Hammett and Hetfield, a wah-wah-crazed solo and, finally, a bridge that feels like an entirely new song. And the spectacular "All Nightmare Long" — a thematic sequel of sorts to "Enter Sandman" — combines relentless Master of Puppets guitars with a Black Album-worthy chorus.

St. Anger was a misguided attempt to recapture the band's mojo by sounding "raw" — but Death Magnetic manages to sound huge, polished and tough. The musicianship feels thrillingly live throughout, and nimble new bassist Robert Trujillo helps, even though he's mostly heard as a distant, ominous rumble. (Has there ever been a more bass-averse band in rock?)
There's supposed to be a lyrical theme here — something about death — but it's hard to discern. After expanding his lyrical palette on previous albums, Hetfield is now so determined to re-metallize that he pushes toward self-parody: "Venom of a life insane/Bites into your fragile vein," he barks on "The Judas Kiss." The "One"-style half-ballad, half-thrasher "The Day That Never Comes" appears to be yet another tale from Hetfield's rough childhood, complete with the awful pun "son shine."

But if you ignore the lyrics, Death Magnetic sounds more like it's about coming back to life. Everything comes together on the fan-favorite-to-be "Broken, Beat and Scarred," which manages to channel the full force of Metallica behind a positive message: "What don't kill ya make ya more strong," Hetfield sings, with enough power to make the cliché feel fresh. The aphorism he paraphrases happens to come from Nietzsche's Twilight of the Idols, which is subtitled How to Philosophize With a Hammer. Metallica's philosophizing may get shaky — but long may that hammer strike

Here's the Jay Ortega "article.".
(I've taken the liberty of putting in boldface the parts which were plagiarized. Some were verbatim, while some were somewhat revised by either changing a word, ommitting a word, or revising the structure of the sentence. )

In the ‘80s, thrash metal wasn’t just a scene, it was an arms race seemingly likened to the Cold War: riffs were speeding up, drum kits got bigger and hair was grown for head-banging. During those days, Metallica was the new king of the metal hill.

With 1991’s “The Black Album,” their most successful one to date, Metallica went for unilateral disarmament, slowing their tempos considerably, shortening their tracks, smelting their crunge guitars and pulverizing drums into chrome-plated pop-rock hooks… Not that “The Black Album” was bad, far from it, it was just more polished and it eventually ushered in a new era, as well as a new audience, for the band. Although, as a live act, they were as strong and powerful as ever, blasting out old and new tunes one after the other with violent fervor.

I should know all about their live bedlam-like act. I was backstage on April 17, 1993 when Metallica invaded Philippine shores and took the Ultra by storm. I even got on stage while local band Razorback was getting ready to open the show, and screamed in unison alongside Wolfgang drummer Wolf Gemora: “Rock on!” We were all awestruck from the moment we entered the venue. We saw the Metallica crates, heard the roadies jamming, even got to meet and speak with then bassist Jason Newstead, and I almost got kicked out of the backstage area for screaming, “Throw me a pick, man!” to half-Filipino Kirk Hammet, Metallica’s lead guitarist. It was wild to say the least, but let’s save that for another article and get back to the latest Metallica onslaught.

After receiving numerous awards for “The Black Album,” the band swiftly moved from one reinvention to another, starting with the Southern-rock infusion of 1996’s “Load,” the follow-up “Re-Load,” until eventually culminating in the muddy, clanky, and bizarrely produced group-therapy session of 2003’s “St. Anger.” The worst Metallica album ever made, in my humble opinion.

With the release of “Death Magnetic,” the band, now armed with new bassist Rob Trujillo, was able to create the musical equivalent of Yao Ming body-slamming Shaq — a sudden act of aggression from a sleeping giant.

Embracing their past, infusing their experience and newfound grit, this album is Metallica becoming Metallica again — specifically, the epic, speed-obsessed version from the band’s template-setting trilogy of mid-‘80s albums: “Master of Puppets,” “Ride the Lightning” and, especially, the stylized “…And Justice for All.”

Everything is clear and evident from the get-go. “Death Magnetic”’s first track, That Was Just Your Life, unleashes a barrage of brilliantly melodic James Hetfield guitar riffs and Lars Ulrich’s octuple-time double-bass-and-snare bashing. The track charges like a beast possessed. That long-vanished, and much-awaited sound, as essential to Metallica as Bonzo’s drum sound was for Led Zep, is all over “Death Magnetic.”

“Death Magnetic” also marks the group’s annulment from producer Bob Rock, who helmed every Metallica album from 1991 to 2004 and pushed them toward succinctness and immediacy — Including “St. Anger,” where his producing magic all but disappeared, added to the fact that the band was on the brink of self-destruction (as evidenced in the Some Kind Of Monster rock-umentary).

New producer Rick Rubin shoves Metallica awake on this new release: Half of “Death Magnetic”’s tracks are over seven minutes long, or even longer, with song structures and arrangements that are not so much verse/chorus/verse, as long intro/heavy jam/verse/even heavier jam/chorus/bridge/wild solo/heavy outro.

As long and heavy as the songs are, it’s not like Top 40 stations are going to slip in Metallica cuts between Miley Cyrus and the Jonas Brothers, anyway… right?

But in all honesty, these songs hardly feel long at all. At their best, they combine the melodic experience of Metallica’s more mature, latter work with the fully cocked-and-loaded battle power of their early days.

The End of the Line is a locomotive rock-hard track with a bouncing riff and lyrics about a doomed, drug-addicted star. (Sounds familiar?) It builds to a speed-obsessed axe-fight between Kirk Hammett and Hetfield, a wah-wah-laden solo and finally a bridge that feels like an entirely new song. Beautiful!

You get that vibe all throughout the album. Soon as something sounds familiar, it turns into an all-together new hook that takes you on a different flight of fancy.

The amazing All Nightmare Long — a thematic sequel of sorts to Enter Sandman, I feel — combines relentless “Master of Puppets” guitars with a “Black Album”-like chorus. It really is a perfect marriage of old school Metallica amalgamated with their well-developed polished side.
“St. Anger” was a failed attempt to recapture the band’s garage days by sounding “raw” — too raw — but “Death Magnetic” manages to sound huge, polished, and full of fuerza bruta or brute force
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Lyrically, James attempts to engage death head-on, and makes it the quintessential theme of the whole album— “Venom of a life insane/Bites into your fragile vein,” he barks on The Judas Kiss… a half-ballad, half-thrasher, just like the next track The Day That Never Comes.
After hearing the rest of the tracks, though, the listener, at least in my case, can’t shake the feeling that instead of simple and literal death, the album lyrically sounds like it is tackling coming back to life as well.

Here’s extra proof from Hetfield’s own mouth: “As if the number ones were not enough excitement, here we are on the cover of Rolling Stone... the first time in 12 years!! It’s been quite the week to say the least…” This is James Hetfield waxing enthusiastic about “Death Magnetic” on the band’s official website.

Obviously the band is enthralled and elated about what the album has achieved in just a couple of weeks since its release last September 12.

And on another positive note, everything comes together on one of my favorite songs Broken, Beat and Scarred, which manages to exude the full force of Metallica behind something optimistic: “What don’t kill ya make ya more strong,” Hetfield wails. The aphorism he paraphrases happens to come from Nietzsche’s Twilight of the Idols.

The track Cyanide could possibly be another fan favorite. A melodic guitar and drum drone coupled with a lyrical hook: “Suicide, I’ve already died, you’re just the funeral I’ve been waiting for, Cyanide.” This track is followed by The Unforgiven III which kicks off with a haunting piano line, laced with an obo-sounding murmur, that slowly builds into a classic Hetfield speed ride. An obvious takeoff from the first two Unforgiven songs, but only lyrically, this tune separates itself through a jigsaw arrangement that definitely works for me. A classic rock anthem with heartfelt guitar solos.

Next on the disc is Suicide & Redemption an empowering riff-laden juggernaut of a song. In local terminology “bagsakan na malupit!” And, before the main riff becomes redundant, in comes a nice, quite melodic part that pieces the song together before introducing another bone-breaking riff that just completes the track. Technically sound and luminous, this epic 10-minute song is a castle-in-the-sky instrumental blast.

The album closes just the way it started — full on kill or be killed offensive assault via the heavier-than-thou My Apocalypse.

Welcome back, Metallica, in all your glory… A powerful force of nature has been reborn
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Now, is it just me, or is the Jay Ortega "article" really an act of plagiarism?

5 comments:

Anonymous said...

tsk tsk. magp-plagiarize lang eh sa rolling stone pa talaga,
gusto mo pre mag-contribute sa pjr tungkol dito? text tayo, tsk tsk

Anonymous said...

Taena 'yan. Grabehan sa pag-plagiarize ah. Talagang mga buong paragraph.

Engot din 'yung Ortega na 'yan ah. Alam naman niyang medyo talk of the town 'yung Metallica ngayon, naisipan pang mag-plagiarize. Kapansin-pansin tuloy agad.

Martin Bolima said...

malamang gamit na gamit yung shift + F7 function ng word (also known as the thesaurus function) nung tina-type ni ortega yung "article" niya..pinalitan lang yung ibang mga words..nag-effort pa ng konti para lang itago yung pag-pe-plagiarize, olats pa din naman..

para tuloy bumaba ang tingin ko sa entertainment/modern living sections ng Philippine Star

Anonymous said...

the shame of this jay who pretends to be a writer. attempts like this should never be tolerated.

Anonymous said...

pucha. sobrang renowned na ng metallica tapos wala pa siyang original thought tungkol sa bagong album nila?

naalala ko tuloy yung "callanta incident" hehehe